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Little Miracle (Free verse) by ainesmith
I remember as though it were just yesterday,
the first time I saw you.
Tiny, pale, wrinkled through my tears.
The pain of only moments earlier a far away dream.
And finally, when we were alone,
I lay there in the quietness.
Watching, breathing, quiet.
Afraid to close my eyes and miss one second of your beauty.
Sleep tried hard to drag me away but I resisted.
Whispered soothing words, and cradled you
My Son.
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Posted: January 12, 2003 5:02 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2003 5:02 AM PST
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