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Free verse № 35477

Little Miracle

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jan 2003 · 0 comments

I remember as though it were just yesterday, the first time I saw you. Tiny, pale, wrinkled through my tears. The pain of only moments earlier a far away dream. And finally, when we were alone, I lay there in the quietness. Watching, breathing, quiet. Afraid to close my eyes and miss one second of your beauty. Sleep tried hard to drag me away but I resisted. Whispered soothing words, and cradled you My Son.

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