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Prize gained life, Death in wages (Free verse) by GTK
Drowned in the sin we bathe, store the anger enrich the crave. Burdens weighted held inside, force and pain blood to cry. Grave dear earth how so old, bought first won then turned sold. Myth by god two true one, create the moons absurd the sun. Set your rules when ours are taken, truth so false but still mistaken. Life of dream memory made in blur, hate of heart in pain we stir. Drugs we take soon begotten, with no means burned the cotton. Peace on earth no will for men, turned out so life born was sin.

Up the ladder: Lost Potential
Down the ladder: crack of light

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10190
Posted: December 12, 2002 10:33 AM PST; Last modified: December 13, 2002 9:32 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/2:09 PM | Reply
plush and disturbing..o
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 13-Dec-02/2:52 AM | Reply
Affecting ! check line one though shouldn't bath be bathe?
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > Caducus | 14-Dec-02/12:56 PM | Reply
i thinks thats their style flaire.
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 5-Feb-04/8:56 PM | Reply
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