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Lost Potential (Free verse) by debased
Your beauty tries not to slip
through your dull appearance
hair that hides half your features
sick, weak, and unmaintained
the strength and power you posses
appears only when you laugh
you're a strong beautiful soul
tide down by life's fuckedupness
people look at you and wonder
that's all you are to many
a puzzle with no clues
a mystical creature drunken in bleach
a bay with no shore
You'er are a garden with no rain
Nothing, meant to be more
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10189
Posted: December 7, 2002 5:26 PM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2002 5:26 PM PST
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