Re: Ash by horus8	28-Oct-04/9:01 PM
i emailed you something scary. did you get it?
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-04/4:20 PM
a stinky pile of piles
Re: I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62	29-Oct-04/4:25 PM
you have an ugly face
Re: I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17	29-Oct-04/4:27 PM
a floppy, shaven walrus clit
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-04/4:38 PM
a dumpling, surrounded by a moat of the brownest gravy.
Re: Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus	29-Oct-04/5:43 PM
asshole. nigger. stupid sonovabitch. Idiot. imbecile. mammoth.
Re: From Womb To Wood by Caducus	29-Oct-04/7:49 PM
I don't think the end redeems anything. He should never have died? hmmmm I thought it was well conceived and well written until the last few lines... though the entire last stanza is awkward.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-04/7:57 PM
you have a smaller mind. you must have a mind full of distorts. i hope you are young and have not exhausted your capacity for learning and change. This "poem" is horribly garbled. Is English your native language?
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	29-Oct-04/8:01 PM
fucking hilarious. Why is he taking pain killers that poison his body? There are perfectly good painkillers on the market that do not poison the body. nothing worse than a poor afficted soul, eh? the end line makes it all worth while, and completely stands this motherfucker on its head and redeems it with a broom handle.
Re: The Old Man by spriggan	29-Oct-04/8:02 PM
a gaping hole. This is great.
Re: Call upon the wrath of god on ye by Imago	29-Oct-04/8:15 PM
rigiditus nippulatum, et clampostona ingratiae solorum solarum, slapadiddle dildatum
Re: The Star Of The Bum by Blindpoetry	29-Oct-04/8:18 PM
is this written in braille or some other code?
Re: The correct order of things by Stephen Robins	29-Oct-04/8:22 PM
a nude, three-legged sack race in a mosquito swarm.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-04/8:50 PM
it has been wrote? is this really what you meant to said?
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Oct-04/6:06 AM
Great. Just right, i think.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Nov-04/5:12 AM
Questions: is the tense change confusing? does it detract? Is it horribly garbled and difficult to decipher? I can't think of anything else at the moment.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Nov-04/5:15 AM
Is the last sentence overly complex and unwieldy?
Re: Everglades parkway by INTRANSIT	1-Nov-04/5:57 AM
The closest takes flight arcing in earnest. "Oh, I know you didn't just..." I close one eye and hunker expecting a sudden and bleeding passenger. I click on the four-ways and ease to the shoulder. The sentence structure becomes repetitive, with all the "I-verb-object"
Re: Going Blind by Sasha	1-Nov-04/12:38 PM
"are you with me Dr. Poo, are you really just the shadow of the man that I once knew?"
Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy	3-Nov-04/9:05 AM
so, you are saying, "now you copulate in the flame" ?