| Re: Child of Troy by Caducus |
27-May-04/10:26 AM |
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27-May-04/10:29 AM |
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yah, we've only just begun feels a little silly, but this is a really good one..
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28-May-04/10:38 AM |
oi vey...a guy fucked you. you want something else, even though there was no pinky promise?
In the immortal words of Clint Eastwood: Deserve's got nothin to do with it.
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28-May-04/2:18 PM |
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28-May-04/2:21 PM |
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the title could be death metal.
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| Re: Get it straight by tre |
28-May-04/2:36 PM |
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zappa, monster guitarist....not poet. this is okay
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-May-04/1:49 PM |
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by far the most profound poeme i have ever read...shear Genious...10
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| Re: bel-air by DR Limerick |
31-May-04/7:39 PM |
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has everything a good limerick should have... lewdness, humor, and fucked up bel-air, mid-air rhyme...and it opens up with the conventional "there once was a man from.." perfect
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| Re: pie man by DR Limerick |
31-May-04/7:42 PM |
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i can only assume you are shooting to make the 20 worst board with this one, so -1-
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| Re: STEP 4 by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/12:43 PM |
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would be much better without that last line...eek that is horrible.
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2-Jun-04/12:52 PM |
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| Re: Heaven Out Here by wilco |
2-Jun-04/7:37 PM |
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2-Jun-04/7:40 PM |
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what is up with the ones and sixes??? i think this is the best of your poetry that i have read. darkness lurks somewhere in a scene artfully painted.
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| Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus |
2-Jun-04/7:46 PM |
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i wont say ugh, but i will say a bit verbose, and the fact that it was intentional doesnt make it any more the readable, sire. courtesy 8
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| Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus |
2-Jun-04/7:47 PM |
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and because no way does it deserve the one and the three...need a balance.
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| Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu |
3-Jun-04/6:27 AM |
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i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
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| Re: Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8 |
4-Jun-04/7:15 AM |
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| Re: love by francis nor capule |
4-Jun-04/3:26 PM |
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| Re: A short trip home by titan69 |
6-Jun-04/2:59 PM |
abraham lincoln with a curling iron
in his pants.
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