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Get it straight (Other) by tre Friendship is not romance.
Romance is not comfort.
Comfort is not love.
Love is not routine.
Routine is not objectivity.
And objectivity is lost
in long term relationships.
*Poem structure inspired by Frank Zappa.
Up the ladder:
Train of Thought
Down the ladder:
Forgiveness
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Posted: May 27, 2004 3:30 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2004 3:30 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2550 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.176.102.131
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27-May-04/4:15 PM
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That is sort of.....Zappaesque?
I really like this hun :)
Practically every single line of this is wrong.
Not surprising, considering your source.
zappa, monster guitarist....not poet. this is okay
Everything you've said can also be accurate you know?
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