Re: a comment on Dream Grower by Enkidu	4-Jan-07/12:36 PM
Much appreciated. I'll go kill myself now because you posted this comment. How can I go on?
Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	3-Aug-06/4:44 PM
from Mac, Enk, and D. to you, Edna, this comes with love.
Re: a comment on When Gravity Unmakes You by Enkidu	3-Aug-06/4:42 PM
Something under your skin, Edna?
Re: Forest by the Sea by Dovina	3-Aug-06/12:56 PM
Not bad, the last verse could be a little stronger, but i like the idea a lot.
Re: Euclidian Insanity by tryplsyted	27-Apr-06/9:02 PM
This could be more polished, but chances are it wouldn't be nearly as good. Loved the title, love the poem, kudos. *10*
Re: 99% of the Time by TLRufener	27-Apr-06/8:54 PM
Uggh. *5*
Re: one by Adriaan	27-Apr-06/8:52 PM
Not my chalice of wine. *6*
Re: one by Adriaan	27-Apr-06/8:52 PM
Not chalice of wine. *6*
Re: Fraser's Wedding by Stephen Robins	27-Apr-06/8:48 PM
What a happy ending...*9*
Re: First Warm Day on Santa Barbara Bay by Dovina	27-Apr-06/8:46 PM
Solid title, solid poem, 'nuff said.*8*
Re: Tang Soo Do See Do by ecargo	27-Apr-06/8:43 PM
Very original, very good. I was thoroughly entertained. *9*
Re: To Brittany by amanda_dcosta	27-Apr-06/8:42 PM
I think "cherub" is a bit out of place, nonetheless, this is pretty good. I especially liked the second stanza. *8*
Re: FISH by annadoc	27-Apr-06/8:40 PM
Eh...I hate wishing I skipped a very mediocre poem, sorry. *5*
Re: Deja Vu by sliver	27-Apr-06/8:36 PM
I have too agree with Dovina, no real substance. Not worth remembering. *6*
Re: Cry by Sunny	27-Apr-06/8:35 PM
Not bad, I loved the line breaks. *8*
Re: The Prayer Vendor by Enkidu	12-Jan-06/10:31 PM
I despise using dictionaries and thesauri unless I'm looking up the spelling of a word. By the way, a deprecation is a sort of prayer. Also, I used deil's (the devil's) smiles as a metaphor for the people who the Vendor makes suffer.
Re: a comment on Suck by MacFrantic	11-Jan-06/10:14 PM
yes, a ghost who has disguised herself as alive to make me calm
Re: a comment on A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu	1-Jan-06/12:37 PM
pronounced "woond"
Re: a comment on Talia Eternal by Enkidu	20-May-05/9:51 PM
Well, "down" is another word for the soft feathers of a bird's plumage. "Slake" is used to describe how these birds calmed Talia's temper. I reluctantly looked in a dictionary and came up with: "To lessen the force or activity of"
Re: a comment on Talia Eternal by Enkidu	20-May-05/6:01 PM
I hate to spoil your disillusioned fantasy, but the scores on this site do not always accurately reflect the quality or lack of quality of most of these poems.