Free verse № 142637
First Warm Day on Santa Barbara Bay
Children digging on the shoreâ
splashing, runningâ
primping little breasts.
Hear the mighty waters roar,
white peaks rising, falling,
reaching up the sand
for final frothy breaths,
dying, glory gone.
Only one child stops a while,
stares at ancient waves,
their long beginnings, rapid ends,
sees them rise when shallow,
bud as breasts, like all the rest.
Better for their coming,
she surmises,
topple in their prime;
then sheâs off to play.
12 comments
last line s2 how about - dying to foam gasps.
Lots of potential it reads like a labour of love.
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