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FISH

by annadoc

Member since 2006 · Posted 26 Apr 2006 · 4 comments

FISH slippery aquatic swim, eat, stare, flaky and lemon flavor cod TIME slow rapid meanders, wanders, travels quickly passes by us Movement FOOD delectable comforting satisfies, nourishes, enriches supplies energy to the soul Sustenance

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4 comments

[5] Enkidu 27-Apr-06/8:40 PM Reply
Eh...I hate wishing I skipped a very mediocre poem, sorry. *5*
[0] god'swife 28-Apr-06/12:55 AM Reply
You have no grasp on human existence. I cannot even venture to guess what childhood atrocities must have been inflicited on you to make you want to write such an empty and uninspired piece of shit as this. You're just one more sorry ass strutting around in this pitiful sanctuary for self-important asses. This drivel lacks all relevancy. Is this what you sit around pondering about? Is this the most intriguing most profound most soulful experience you can write about? What the fuck, are you some kind of horrible mutant? Try 'writing' something pertinent, germane, material, apropos to the soul and its struggle. It's tragic that such a bunch of heartless pukes have turned a once stimulating arena of thought into a incestuious hotbed of superfluous and inferior banter. The fact that some idiots feel it neccessary, let alone plausible, to leave comments on such atrocities is only more proof that you've all completely lost connection with the drama of human existence. You should all be ashamed of yourselves. Get a life. A real one consisting of love and loss, pain and exrutiating ecxtasy, the awareness of our absurd and fleeting existence. You're all stuck in a boring putrid land of make believe. Fucking losers.

You write like an epiletic having a fit.
[n/a] annadoc 28-Apr-06/4:18 PM Reply
Thought I'd write a cinquain. Shouldn'ta posted, but I did. Why the venom (seething out)?
[n/a] Ranger › annadoc 28-Apr-06/4:24 PM Reply
It doesn't go along with the syllable structure of traditional cinquains, although I like the idea. There is the option to post as a cinquain as well.
Don't mind the comment from god'swife. Personally I have doubts it was even her saying it, but that same comment has been replicated on multiple poems in the recent list. Ignore it. Comment on other peoples' poems and try to get useful feedback instead.