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FISH (Other) by annadoc

FISH slippery aquatic swim, eat, stare, flaky and lemon flavor cod TIME slow rapid meanders, wanders, travels quickly passes by us Movement FOOD delectable comforting satisfies, nourishes, enriches supplies energy to the soul Sustenance

Ranger 28-Apr-06/4:24 PM
It doesn't go along with the syllable structure of traditional cinquains, although I like the idea. There is the option to post as a cinquain as well.
Don't mind the comment from god'swife. Personally I have doubts it was even her saying it, but that same comment has been replicated on multiple poems in the recent list. Ignore it. Comment on other peoples' poems and try to get useful feedback instead.




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