Ranger28 Apr 2006

It doesn't go along with the syllable structure of traditional cinquains, although I like the idea. There is the option to post as a cinquain as well.
Don't mind the comment from god'swife. Personally I have doubts it was even her saying it, but that same comment has been replicated on multiple poems in the recent list. Ignore it. Comment on other peoples' poems and try to get useful feedback instead.