Re: I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson	20-May-05/1:05 PM
I do not feel, presently, like explaining myself. *7*
Re: a comment on Talia Eternal by Enkidu	20-May-05/1:01 PM
If my comment was considerably "nasty", then you have some serious reality to wake up to. If anything was particularly bullish and outstanding, it was the comment that is presently being responded to. If you knew what the word slake truly meant then you would realize it has nothing to do with liquid in the context of my poem, which utilizes its alternate meaning quite well. If you have to pick up a dictionary while you are writing YOUR poetry, then I suggest that you put down your finger paints and use words that you have actual knowledge of. I bet you use a thesaurus as well...you intolerable, mindstarving, study-case shell of a poet.
Re: a comment on Talia Eternal by Enkidu	19-May-05/5:00 PM
Slake is a wonderful word to use because it describes how her temper was moderated. Secondly, "about her person" effectively illustrates that she is not yet being harmed by the sun's rays. They are not, in fact, touching her true body. Of course this only makes sense to a vampire! She IS one! If you can't understand that, then read the poem you dolt.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	19-May-05/11:42 AM
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Re: a comment on One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu	3-Jun-04/9:10 AM
Exactly, so thanks, and I did write it in thirty seconds, at 1:05 in the morning.
Re: The devils win by firestar_2580	25-May-04/7:01 AM
Spell Check - no Grammar Check - no Content Check - no Why do you even bother, this must have been written in a matter of forty-five seconds. My shitty comment took longer than that. -2-
Re: my truth by francis nor capule	25-May-04/6:53 AM
Good pace, very even throughout, except for the first two lines which stutter a bit. S4 L1, 2ps in hapiness. -7-
Re: a comment on The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu	14-May-04/11:45 AM
Oh, Ms. Allonby, all riled up and no place to go. Big words from such a tiny mind. If I had your motivation I'd take up a permanent residence at the Neverland Ranch It's just poetry, you ignorant slut.
Re: a comment on A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." by Enkidu	14-May-04/6:43 AM
Thank you much and often
Re: a comment on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha	13-May-04/9:54 PM
where in colorado?
Re: a comment on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha	13-May-04/9:53 PM
Where in colorado?
Re: a comment on Utility Rose by Enkidu	3-May-04/7:23 AM
Appreciate it, one of my more pondered poems.
Re: A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe	26-Apr-04/6:49 AM
And I saideth unto Him "Hurry upeth! You're using all the hot water!" Bathroom 2:14:99
Re: a comment on Stealing Glory by Enkidu	22-Apr-04/6:42 PM
Why add more when you can erase the loner? *heh*
Re: One or the Same by Enkidu	16-Apr-04/11:45 AM
There once was poet, a cheat Who thought he was good on his feet So he looked and he found That his distance from ground Made he journey to hell most complete (Hee Hee, Ha, Ho, Hah, Ah hah, Heh, Oh ho, *sigh* Not funny)
Re: One or the Same by Enkidu	16-Apr-04/7:38 AM
If you figure it out, please say so and I will go to your first poem and comment if you're right.
Re: Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu	5-Apr-04/9:21 PM
Sorry, castless should be cast-e-less. But the current meaning could be interpreted as if the world was devoid of people, or its "cast."