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Utility Rose (Free verse) by Enkidu
You can banter semantics or God
And the sun will still rise
An inspired mind will diminish us
Certain as salesman and the lottery
Coupling the governed in dependency
What a life lost and locked to a bed
Gambling on airplanes and automobiles
That lovely girl with generic curls
Flatter her with a utility rose
Kindling for the feminine fire
Proverbs aside direct your attention
To infancy and traditional toil
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2397
Posted: May 2, 2004 7:18 PM PDT; Last modified: May 3, 2004 7:22 AM PDT
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s5 - Great
s6 - It reflects s1 and is great