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Utility Rose (Free verse) by Enkidu
You can banter semantics or God And the sun will still rise An inspired mind will diminish us Certain as salesman and the lottery Coupling the governed in dependency What a life lost and locked to a bed Gambling on airplanes and automobiles That lovely girl with generic curls Flatter her with a utility rose Kindling for the feminine fire Proverbs aside direct your attention To infancy and traditional toil

Up the ladder: The Consultation
Down the ladder: Ode to my Poopy

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2393
Posted: May 2, 2004 7:18 PM PDT; Last modified: May 3, 2004 7:22 AM PDT
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[9] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 2-May-04/8:26 PM | Reply
s1 - Great
s2 - Good
s3 - Don't get it.
s4 - Can't relate the two lines
s5 - Great
s6 - It reflects s1 and is great
[n/a] Enkidu @ 204.98.2.23 > deleted user | 3-May-04/7:23 AM | Reply
Appreciate it, one of my more pondered poems.
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