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Utility Rose (Free verse) by Enkidu

You can banter semantics or God And the sun will still rise An inspired mind will diminish us Certain as salesman and the lottery Coupling the governed in dependency What a life lost and locked to a bed Gambling on airplanes and automobiles That lovely girl with generic curls Flatter her with a utility rose Kindling for the feminine fire Proverbs aside direct your attention To infancy and traditional toil

hypatia 2-May-04/8:26 PM
s1 - Great
s2 - Good
s3 - Don't get it.
s4 - Can't relate the two lines
s5 - Great
s6 - It reflects s1 and is great




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