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my truth (Free verse) by francis nor capule
i have often thought
why people can't kick themselves
probably because you learn
from the mistakes you make
i have often wondered
why pride is such an important thing
all it leaves you is pain and loneliness
nothing in between
i have often said
to myself that when i find
the right one for me
there'd be no heartache and tears
only happiness true and pure
calm, serene and bliss
but people make mistakes
and sometimes , the harshest of all
is never admitting them...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8242
Posted: May 25, 2004 5:26 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 7:11 AM PDT
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S4 L1, 2ps in hapiness.
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