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part of autumn (Free verse) by winniss
The summer ended in a colorful death, as the frost flowed from my breath. I felt the change ride in on the wind,letting me become a child again. I silently watch as pieces of color dance in the breeze. So enchanted I fell to my knees, In to a pile of leaves. As I lie face down to the ground,peacefully paralyzed and attuned to the sounds,a piece in a puzzle I have finally found.


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8231
Posted: October 23, 2007 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2007 5:43 PM PDT
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[6] Musicman @ 192.208.44.100 | 24-Oct-07/1:39 AM | Reply
Nice imagery and flow.
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