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part of autumn (Free verse) by winniss
The summer ended in a colorful death, as the
frost flowed from my breath.
I felt the change ride in on the
wind,letting me become a child again.
I silently watch as pieces of color dance in
the breeze.
So enchanted I fell to my knees, In to a
pile of leaves. As I lie face down to the ground,peacefully
paralyzed and attuned to the sounds,a piece
in a puzzle I have finally found.
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Posted: October 23, 2007 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2007 5:43 PM PDT
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