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Face of Iran

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Apr 2006 · Edited 18 Apr 2006 · 6 comments

The electric veils Concealing warheads or watts? Fallout overhead.

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[n/a] Caducus 13-Apr-06/7:49 AM Reply
Anyone seen Threads?
[8] Dovina 13-Apr-06/9:25 AM Reply
Why "dust"? Maybe "amps" or "watts"
[n/a] Caducus › Dovina 18-Apr-06/1:22 AM Reply
watts it is then, thanks.
[8] ALChemy 15-Apr-06/9:00 AM Reply
I've been telling people since we went to Iraq that Iran was next. All you have to do is look at a map of the middle east to see why. It's not just about oil, it's about having the entire middle east pretty much under our thumb. Afghanistan, Iraq, Iran and of course Israel plus hopefully Jordan means you split the middle east right down the center, sea to sea. Plus, believe me, North Africa would love to start getting some of that U.S. money and this could leave a back door for trading with them. At least that's my theory so far.
Nice haiku by the way.
[9] Ranger 17-Apr-06/2:07 AM Reply
Smartly written, would have preferred lowercase 'electric', but that's the only suggestion.
[9] Ranger 18-Apr-06/1:30 AM Reply
Decent edit. I've thought more about this and the double meaning in here is great. I was a bit hasty beforehand. It made me think of those bombers who disguised themselves as women, 'warheads' works really well with this. Damn good thoughts in here, vote increased accordingly.