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Face of Iran (Haiku) by Caducus

The electric veils Concealing warheads or watts? Fallout overhead.

Ranger 18-Apr-06/1:30 AM
Decent edit. I've thought more about this and the double meaning in here is great. I was a bit hasty beforehand. It made me think of those bombers who disguised themselves as women, 'warheads' works really well with this. Damn good thoughts in here, vote increased accordingly.




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