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my truth (Free verse) by francis nor capule

i have often thought why people can't kick themselves probably because you learn from the mistakes you make i have often wondered why pride is such an important thing all it leaves you is pain and loneliness nothing in between i have often said to myself that when i find the right one for me there'd be no heartache and tears only happiness true and pure calm, serene and bliss but people make mistakes and sometimes , the harshest of all is never admitting them...

Enkidu 25-May-04/6:53 AM
Good pace, very even throughout, except for the first two lines which stutter a bit.
S4 L1, 2ps in hapiness.
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