regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jun-04/8:54 PM
As a translation, it's Ace. I'm just still having trouble with the whole voting for translations as original work thing. Oh well.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	7-Jun-04/2:00 PM
Started out good, but yes, not as good toward the end..
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jun-04/2:03 PM
I must say that I'm more than a little perplesed by this. I guess I'm going to have to do some googling. Anyway..7 for making me think...I may raise it if I figure this out. ;0)
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	7-Jun-04/3:24 PM
another translation?
Re: A life unsure by sliver	7-Jun-04/8:32 PM
Personally, I like this a lot better now. Sounds kind of like a Phish song.
Re: Isn't it a wonder by caitydee	8-Jun-04/3:03 PM
I've always kind of been of the idea that those signs were more of a PR move than actually caring that the president died. I like this idea better though.
Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer	8-Jun-04/3:08 PM
Sorry SD, just not feeling this one..
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-04/3:10 PM
i.e. - "Loving you will all my heart" Should that be "with all my heart"?
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jun-04/7:57 PM
Colorado is truly one of the most beautiful places I have ever been.
Re: Now That's What I Call Music Vol. 1,087 by Nicholas Jones	9-Jun-04/8:35 PM
I get what you're trying to convey, but its not worded in a manner that gives me wood.
Re: my unicorn by francis nor capule	9-Jun-04/8:37 PM
unicorns? really?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-04/8:39 PM
Maybe its because I'm drunk...but I get this and I LIKE it...I'll read it sober and see, but right now...yep.
Re: Bugs by INTRANSIT	9-Jun-04/8:40 PM
true
Re: The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco	10-Jun-04/5:05 PM
You know, and this is just me...but I think if you're going to give somebody a 0, the least you can do is leave a comment giving a reason.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-04/4:11 PM
Waiting to hear of a loved ones death? or a birth?
Re: The Stickmen of Fools by embersandenvelopes	14-Jun-04/2:07 PM
I'm not sure exactly what's going on here, but I like the imagery.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jun-04/8:34 PM
I'll give you a 1, just for figuring out how to rhyme.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-04/2:20 PM
I agree. The title could be a little better, but great nonetheless.
Re: tripped on an eggo by horus9	15-Jun-04/7:39 PM
How can you smoke a joint and call Bob Marley a fag?
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jun-04/9:56 PM
My only problem with this is that it sounds like it should be sung by muppets. No offense, I think it just seems too damn uplifting. There is nothing wrong with that, the wording just seems too simple. Like an off-the-cuff speech from Tony Robbins. I think you can do better.