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my unicorn (Free verse) by francis nor capule
there she was , on the glen
a creature as pure as pure can be
white mane flowing
ivory horn pointing up to the bluest sky
i have often wondered what good i did
for me to see such beauty
to witness such a sight
probably plain luck or chance, i guess
so i try and get near
to bathe in her light
make her mine, mine indeed
and just stay in this bliss forever
but when i was near enough
near enough to take the chance
away she fled , without a glance
and i was left , my soul in awe
at the fleeing beauty
my soul left empty
it was like chasing rainbows
building sand castles
both are but dreams
dreams that fade
like mine did... the moment i lost her...
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7461
Posted: June 9, 2004 9:08 AM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2004 4:10 AM PDT
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