Not your best by a long shot, but still pretty good.

Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right.

One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.

Gotta love music.

Always a super feeling when you escape without waking them up.

I like it. Could be better...I don't know exactly. I'll leave it to you...It's good as it is...or make it great.

Not near as good as the other Lake Michigan one.

I'm not sure why I like it...I do, but I'm not sure why...short-haired chest line bothers me for some reason...

Kind of makes sens in a nonsensey sort of way...I think you could put quotes around the parts where they're talking to help it read a little easier.

This doesn't make a lot of sense and the rhymes seem forced...sorry.

I'm all out of love, I'm so lost without you....

So...people go...and read their poetry...on a microphone...to other people...what'll they think of next?!

I can't say that I have. I'm going to assume you have, though, and give this an 8.

So, what happened? I leave for a while and Rockmage comes back filled with old hippie hatred for everything and plasters everyone with zeroes? I'm a little confused.

I don't know that this is a concrete...I'm a fan of repetition to some extend but I think it's too much here. Try the "deep dark eyes part mybe every third or fourth stanza...

I'm not sure what the hell Cha is, but it makes me feel funny in the pantular area.

Ever the asshole...

mmmph...

Some interfsting images here, but Rockmage is right above: They don't hang together well.

Nice ending, but sorry to say, the rest is not....ummm great....