| Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus |
25-Feb-05/8:25 PM |
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Not your best by a long shot, but still pretty good.
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
25-Feb-05/8:29 PM |
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Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right.
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| Re: Forest Rain by bamf909 |
26-Feb-05/8:47 PM |
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One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.
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| Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina |
28-Mar-05/5:00 PM |
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| Re: Homecoming by Dovina |
12-May-05/6:03 PM |
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Always a super feeling when you escape without waking them up.
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| Re: On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee |
12-May-05/6:08 PM |
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I like it. Could be better...I don't know exactly. I'll leave it to you...It's good as it is...or make it great.
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| Re: Lake Michigan by jessicazee |
12-May-05/6:17 PM |
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Not near as good as the other Lake Michigan one.
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12-May-05/6:20 PM |
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I'm not sure why I like it...I do, but I'm not sure why...short-haired chest line bothers me for some reason...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-May-05/6:31 PM |
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Kind of makes sens in a nonsensey sort of way...I think you could put quotes around the parts where they're talking to help it read a little easier.
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| Re: White by Enkidu |
12-May-05/6:34 PM |
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This doesn't make a lot of sense and the rhymes seem forced...sorry.
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| Re: My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee |
12-May-05/6:39 PM |
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I'm all out of love, I'm so lost without you....
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-May-05/6:41 PM |
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So...people go...and read their poetry...on a microphone...to other people...what'll they think of next?!
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| Re: Swoon by Dovina |
23-May-05/3:41 PM |
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I can't say that I have. I'm going to assume you have, though, and give this an 8.
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| Re: Spontaneous Combustion by wilco |
23-May-05/8:27 PM |
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So, what happened? I leave for a while and Rockmage comes back filled with old hippie hatred for everything and plasters everyone with zeroes? I'm a little confused.
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| Re: Semite to Semite by PodPoet |
23-May-05/8:40 PM |
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I don't know that this is a concrete...I'm a fan of repetition to some extend but I think it's too much here. Try the "deep dark eyes part mybe every third or fourth stanza...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-May-05/8:42 PM |
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I'm not sure what the hell Cha is, but it makes me feel funny in the pantular area.
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| Re: MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com by Bluemonkey |
25-May-05/6:17 PM |
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| Re: MTV's The Real World: Poemranker by Bluemonkey |
25-May-05/6:20 PM |
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| Re: Never Ending Cycle by ingwa |
25-May-05/6:23 PM |
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Some interfsting images here, but Rockmage is right above: They don't hang together well.
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25-May-05/6:24 PM |
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Nice ending, but sorry to say, the rest is not....ummm great....
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