Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	5-Feb-03/6:33 AM
You shock me with your spelling (dissapoint?!), but I guess that's not what you intend to do. So shock me then, bitch.
Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	5-Feb-03/6:31 AM
Why is the comment racist? The author of the poem is American, and by my judgement, is dumb. Sorry for any offence taken, but I am merely stating what in my opinion is fact.
Re: The Considerate Lover by Tascobar	4-Feb-03/6:54 AM
Genius. Have a 9.
Re: The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Feb-03/6:50 AM
Utter shite. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb Yank.
Re: Two Towers by Tascobar	14-Oct-02/5:23 AM
I think you have opened a can of worms here. Dangerously offensive, but then I like work which challenges the stereotype of acceptableness. 7, for sheer bravado.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	9-Oct-02/2:59 PM
Simple but effective. 8. I like it.
Re: A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator	9-Oct-02/2:49 PM
The idea of your poem is interesting, if not incredibly politically incorrect, but your execution is very poor. 1. Written with a clumsy hand, and the final line simply stinks.
Re: Angels by Reuben Spiteri	9-Oct-02/11:55 AM
You've got a great name, Reuben Spiteri; almost as good as mine. Unfortunately, this poem is far from great. 2. There is nothing here to stir any kind of emotion in me. Bland as bland can be.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1	9-Oct-02/11:48 AM
Highly pretentious. 2. You fail to engage me at all, and I would personally welcome it if you too went 'headlong into this deep dark pit' that you mention and never emerge again. Also, for an individual so obsessed with commas, surely you know that 'deep dark pit' should be 'deep, dark pit' due to the placement of two adjectives side by side?
Re: a comment on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog	9-Oct-02/3:44 AM
Can a poem not tell a story? You are a misguided fool. Run along my child, and concentrate your desultory comments on a subject you at least have an inkling about next time.
Re: I don't fit in by devina	9-Oct-02/3:30 AM
Woeful. 0. If I had a pound for every outpouring of teenage angst that I've read on this site, I'd be a very rich man. There's nothing particularly wrong with your words apart from being a masterclass in how to write dull cliches, but PLEASE change the subject matter and stop sounding so whiny and pathetic. Look up unoriginal in the dictionary, and this poem would be there. I am offended to my core.
Re: Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar	9-Oct-02/3:23 AM
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Re: Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar	9-Oct-02/3:23 AM
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Re: Birth by nentwined	2-Oct-02/2:00 PM
Nice, apart from the final line. 8. It's a little bit flat. 72 anonymous votes of 10 though? Marking your own work only cheats yourself. And makes you appear lonely. Don't stoop that low.
Re: Why? by martysmiles	2-Oct-02/1:52 PM
Perhaps people stare, say mean things and do all the other actions mentioned in your poem because your poetry is so bad. Have you ever considered that? Hmmm? You score 0.
Re: Drug Dealer by Bazilla	2-Oct-02/1:46 PM
A Beatles fan are we? 0. Your imagination appears to have been stunted at birth.
Re: Up The Road Aways by harrytuttle	2-Oct-02/1:42 PM
And your point is? There's some nice wording in places; 'slinging slugs of muck to the wind' is lovely, but the ending is cliched and dull. Have a 4, as an encouragement for future efforts.
Re: Ode to Molly by knickytoy	2-Oct-02/1:39 PM
This has not come from your pen, but from your rectum instead. 1. 'My wittle honey' is so nauseating that I dry-retched on impulse, and the only saving grace is that you do not thrust more of this bile upon us. Terrible.
Re: a comment on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	29-Sep-02/9:57 AM
Thanks very much for the 0. I'm glad you recognise my ability to type letters, as this is clearly something you have only just mastered yourself. Your lack of caps, punctuation and spacing can only lead me to conclude that you are a complete retard. Go away and crawl under your rock, slimeball. As for the poem, it has hidden depths (get it?!) which you are evidently unable to sink to.
Re: Inner Peace by god	10-Sep-02/4:41 PM
Profound. 7. I like the idea behind this, and I think I see what you are trying to convey. You should be aware however, that your wife also lurks about this website. If I were you, I'd keep her chained up in the kitchen or bedroom where I could see her.