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Inner Peace (Haiku) by god Trading in turmoil
Market is now in free fall
Time for inner peace
Up the ladder:
Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me
Down the ladder:
Why Did God Do This To Me?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.7916667
Posted: September 10, 2002 10:47 AM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2002 10:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.799754 Overall Rank: 13491 Comments:
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10-Sep-02/1:57 PM
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"God?" and wasn't this already submitted by someone else?
Profound. 7. I like the idea behind this, and I think I see what you are trying to convey. You should be aware however, that your wife also lurks about this website. If I were you, I'd keep her chained up in the kitchen or bedroom where I could see her.
I've seen eleven poems, this one has come up 4 times.
Who made you "god"?
This is stupid. A Haiku is supposed to be an image not some didactic attempt at a proverb.
GO FUCK URSEFL
suckey suckey
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