Re: the abandoned sea by crin	14-Aug-02/2:43 AM
I'm a fool for rhetorical questioning! 9. The poem is accessible but deep. Nice choice of words and images.
Re: I LOVE YOUR HATE AND RIDICULE by http://janglingjack	14-Aug-02/2:48 AM
I think you succeed in creating a sniping mood and a sense of biting rhythm. 6.
Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky	14-Aug-02/9:42 AM
Nice. Some really good lines, and the ending is powerful. 8. Would have scored even higher if it weren't a tad lengthy and colloquial in places.
Re: Clit by unknown	14-Aug-02/9:46 AM
For an off-the-cuff, slapdash effort, not bad at all. 5. It made me smile. Still, I hope you didn't slave away on it.
Re: Decisions by x311	14-Aug-02/9:49 AM
Dull. 2. I read the whole poem, but the fact that I really couldn't care less about it before I got halfway through tells the whole story, me thinks.
Re: Salt by <~>	14-Aug-02/9:55 AM
Very good! 8. The form is great, and some of the imagery is nicely done - 'vinegar now in his kiss'. Just one thing though; there's no mention of Tequila!
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/9:56 AM
Inoffensive dross. 5. There's nothing here that incenses me, but then again, there's nothing to make me ever want to read it again.
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	14-Aug-02/10:01 AM
Good so far, but it's too vague. 6. You've left me wanting more, which I suppose is a good thing, but I want to know more details about the situation you describe. If I was feeling harsh, I'd suggest the poem is wishy-washy toss, but I'm not. I like the way it is left open to interpretation.
Re: Tall can of Budweiser by bondjedi	14-Aug-02/10:07 AM
A successful Haiku makes words seem irrelevant. This has it in abundance. 9. Brilliant.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/10:09 AM
A job well done. 9. I love the idea of 'wafting warmth in still air'.
Re: How much? by T.Becquerel II	14-Aug-02/10:18 AM
This I like. 7. It's quirky and different. A refreshing change.
Re: Alone by Lil_Chick_512	14-Aug-02/4:26 PM
This is basic, yet fantastic. 10. The best piece of work I've read on this site.
Re: My Tolkien Fantasty by ==Doylum	14-Aug-02/4:27 PM
The title is inspired. 9. A very worthy Haiku.
Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi	14-Aug-02/4:32 PM
Wow! I laughed till I cried. 10. It's funny but profound. The title is absolute genius, and the Haiku does not fail to live up to it.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/4:37 PM
It actually starts quite intriguingly, but rapidly descends into utter farce and shite. 1. If I were your vet, I'd put you out your misery.
Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum	14-Aug-02/4:39 PM
10. Words are inadequate to describe this brilliance.
Re: A little part by savannah	14-Aug-02/4:42 PM
This is tosh. 0. The first two lines are really good, but at the end the poem reads like a terribly cliched greeting card. Awful stuff.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/4:44 PM
The use of punctuation in the first line, I like. The rest? I don't. 4.
Re: Exquisite Explosion by Venus	14-Aug-02/4:50 PM
I like this. 7. The use of language is well chosen and expressive. A nice poem.
Re: A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum	14-Aug-02/4:51 PM
Not bad. 6. A nice ending, to what otherwise was a disappointing piece.