on A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum
14 Aug 2002, 4:51 PM
Not bad. 6. A nice ending, to what otherwise was a disappointing piece.
on Clit by unknown
14 Aug 2002, 9:46 AM
For an off-the-cuff, slapdash effort, not bad at all. 5. It made me smile. Still, I hope you didn't slave away on it.
on My Tolkien Fantasty by ==Doylum
14 Aug 2002, 4:27 PM
The title is inspired. 9. A very worthy Haiku.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 9:56 AM
Inoffensive dross. 5. There's nothing here that incenses me, but then again, there's nothing to make me ever want to read it again.
on Tall can of Budweiser by bondjedi
14 Aug 2002, 10:07 AM
A successful Haiku makes words seem irrelevant. This has it in abundance. 9. Brilliant.
on Alone by Lil_Chick_512
14 Aug 2002, 4:26 PM
This is basic, yet fantastic. 10. The best piece of work I've read on this site.
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
14 Aug 2002, 4:32 PM
Wow! I laughed till I cried. 10. It's funny but profound. The title is absolute genius, and the Haiku does not fail to live up to it.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 4:37 PM
It actually starts quite intriguingly, but rapidly descends into utter farce and shite. 1. If I were your vet, I'd put you out your misery.
on Strange but true by ==Doylum
14 Aug 2002, 4:39 PM
10. Words are inadequate to describe this brilliance.
on A little part by savannah
14 Aug 2002, 4:42 PM
This is tosh. 0. The first two lines are really good, but at the end the poem reads like a terribly cliched greeting card. Awful stuff.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 4:44 PM
The use of punctuation in the first line, I like. The rest? I don't. 4.
on Exquisite Explosion by Venus
14 Aug 2002, 4:50 PM
I like this. 7. The use of language is well chosen and expressive. A nice poem.
on This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky
14 Aug 2002, 9:42 AM
Nice. Some really good lines, and the ending is powerful. 8. Would have scored even higher if it weren't a tad lengthy and colloquial in places.
on Thorns by poetandknowit
14 Aug 2002, 10:01 AM
Good so far, but it's too vague. 6. You've left me wanting more, which I suppose is a good thing, but I want to know more details about the situation you describe. If I was feeling harsh, I'd suggest the poem is wishy-washy toss, but I'm not. I like the way it is left open to interpretation.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 10:09 AM
A job well done. 9. I love the idea of 'wafting warmth in still air'.
on the abandoned sea by crin
14 Aug 2002, 2:43 AM
I'm a fool for rhetorical questioning! 9. The poem is accessible but deep. Nice choice of words and images.
on I LOVE YOUR HATE AND RIDICULE by http://janglingjack
14 Aug 2002, 2:48 AM
I think you succeed in creating a sniping mood and a sense of biting rhythm. 6.
on How much? by T.Becquerel II
14 Aug 2002, 10:18 AM
This I like. 7. It's quirky and different. A refreshing change.