Re: Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin	4-Dec-02/7:21 AM
This is above all my learning. When are finals over so your friend will come back. I lost her e-mail!
Re: Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT	4-Dec-02/7:18 AM
Funny and goofy at the same time.
Re: want of warmth by <~>	4-Dec-02/7:16 AM
Writing while drinking.
Re: Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones	4-Dec-02/7:15 AM
I think you have thirty poems here, not one. Tackling it all at once is a bit like a survey course in contemporary history. And that is what the poem feels like. If you take individual concerns from the poem and give them personal anecdotes you might achieve what you are looking for: to be revolutionary. I think all these issues are important to rip into, but if you want to affect change maybe you should not overwhelm the reader.
Re: she said by Bill Z Bub	4-Dec-02/7:08 AM
Excellent last stanza, although I am not a fan of the "yearning souls" bit. I realize it is important to the overall rhyme scheme, but the souls part good go. Call it "For a Good Time, Call".
Re: The Black Cottage by w~* ATHENA *~w	4-Dec-02/7:03 AM
I suggest in the future stealing from more obscure poets. These are too easy. Z do your thing! Must you continue these games. Do you write your own poetry?
Re: a comment on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit	3-Dec-02/2:37 PM
You are right. It is a mere fragment written on the back of a credit card slip in the car. But you are correct and maybe at some point I will be ready to tackle the subject properly. thanks for the comment.
Re: a comment on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8	30-Nov-02/5:37 PM
Hey, fuck you. I went to private school. I never had a parrot though. So is GW fat with acne just like you?
Re: Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum	27-Nov-02/9:30 AM
It is up to you Dolie to save the fate of English literature. Go now to the towns, to the country, rid the isles of cultural mediocrity. Ring your cowbell in the night, line them up, make them take notice. Take away their TVs. Do you prefer goats over pigs? Do they have souls? It is good to see you keeping with current events. This will get the Hours8 journalism approval.
Re: a comment on Friend by MysticalRaven88	27-Nov-02/9:28 AM
Yeah, it is the melting pot after all.
Re: a comment on Friend by MysticalRaven88	27-Nov-02/9:27 AM
Spoken like a true teenager. Hooray for boobies, and generic ideas of the world. Turn off the BBC and read a book so you do not sound like a dork.
Re: Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT	27-Nov-02/9:09 AM
Much better, but ditch the title.
Re: a comment on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8	26-Nov-02/7:39 PM
Well, since the Brits are panning the Yanks and the Welsh the Brits and Dolie is panning for gold and urananium in the midland of his own mind, shall we start our own civil war. Like the East coast sucks...how could anyone with sane mind live there?
Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:36 PM
Was everybody nice to everyone else? No food fights? I must walk the dogs.
Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:28 PM
I thought your were at the barn getting naked with your hippie friends and chanting B.F. Skinner tonight.
Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:24 PM
Actually, I quite enjoy the haiku if used properly. I think it allows you: 1) to reduce emotion, sometimes difficult emotion, into simple images and 2) create pure imagery. However, folks seem to be tied up on English variations of it and forget the images for say, a comedic purpose. That bothers me. Ypu did not do that here, so don't pull a God's Wife on me.
Re: rain by skinda	26-Nov-02/7:18 PM
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
Re: rain by skinda	26-Nov-02/7:18 PM
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88	26-Nov-02/7:17 PM
Well, Melinda, you are 14. Puberty has got you down, and let me tell you, it does not get any better from here on out. Pure acne.
Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:13 PM
Get over it. Cute at best.