Re: Jericho by goldfish	8-Aug-02/10:52 AM
Beautiful and moving
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Aug-02/10:59 AM
"the portraits of harbored silence" - great line!
Re: Chuds in the mall by razorgrin	8-Aug-02/11:00 AM
I'm not much for Haiku, but I love this one!
Re: Master Chef by Takay Shitar	8-Aug-02/12:53 PM
sounds delicious
Re: Bastard Of The Bastard by Bachus	8-Aug-02/8:36 PM
Your imagery is quite lovely, and such wonderfully nasty verse.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Aug-02/9:33 AM
Beautiful
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Aug-02/12:19 PM
I don't think earning 'brownie points' is necessarily the goal here.
Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin	9-Aug-02/1:17 PM
Engaging, sick, and wrong - enjoyed it!
Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8	9-Aug-02/2:13 PM
This frightens me. I must read more.
Re: Whisper Under the Thunder by OneFingerAnswer	9-Aug-02/2:49 PM
Really moving. Last line is perfect.
Re: Rented Romance by OneFingerAnswer	9-Aug-02/2:56 PM
I know exactly what you mean.
Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer	9-Aug-02/3:01 PM
I like it. And not only that, I think I may even 'get it'.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Aug-02/3:13 PM
You are so right, there are other words. You know, I tried 'throbbing purple hornswaggler' first, but it through off the cadence.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Aug-02/4:01 PM
This style reminds me of Dorothy Parker. 9/10
Re: AT AMSTERDAM STATION FOR FIRST TIME by kawakurdi	11-Aug-02/8:06 AM
Just read all of your work and liked it all. This one is my favorite, as I play this game too. May I suggest you try Asia?
Re: Diminishing by <~>	12-Aug-02/8:06 AM
Your work is an inspiration!
Re: Day of Reckoning by Lenore	12-Aug-02/9:26 PM
Mental Note: Do not piss off Lenore. Let's hear it for sweet revenge! 8/10
Re: drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/9:33 PM
Wow, I'm there. 9/10