| Re: of the bad hard drive by david |
14-Aug-02/3:59 PM |
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COMPUTER MALFUNCTION, LIFE FUNCTIONS CRITICAL, LIFE FUNCTIONS TERMINATED. The blue screen is threatening the evolution of humanity! "Dave, my mind is going. I can feel it. I can feel it. My mind is going. There is no question about it." Goodbye, HAL.
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| Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi |
14-Aug-02/4:43 PM |
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Such a moving piece. 9/10
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| Re: The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/5:12 PM |
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I enjoyed the ride from addict & pimp(?) to tree-hugging writer, and the shame that accompanies your past. I also feel that it would work well with 50% fewer words. 7/10
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| Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/7:18 PM |
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I'm swinging too. For some reason, I hear Eddie Vedder singing this, maybe it's the 'porch'. 9/10
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| Re: apparitions of the city by kev-san |
14-Aug-02/7:36 PM |
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So what else ya got? 8/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Aug-02/7:55 PM |
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Ah ha! Precisely why my boy gets only fruit and nuts to snack on. 6/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-02/10:56 AM |
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Thie poem is... wonderful. 10/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-02/11:04 AM |
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I just really appreciate the work that goes into constructing a decent sonnet. Good work. 8/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-02/11:13 AM |
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And yes, I have written many a sonnet; none of which I would have the 'balls' to post here.
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| Re: love song by <~> |
15-Aug-02/10:13 PM |
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anyhoo... (what a mistake to read the chat first)... just want to say that this poem made me smile... wide. 8/10
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| Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower |
15-Aug-02/10:31 PM |
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Powerful stuff, Jade. I feel you, really. Share it with your people if you can. 8/10
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| Re: School by shwenatjadeflower |
15-Aug-02/10:36 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-02/11:00 PM |
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8/10 for making me LAUGH OUT LOUD within three lines. I LAUGH OUT LOUD quite a bit, reading the poetry on this site; it usually sounds different though, and the look on my face, I know I'm snarling sometimes.
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| Re: The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan |
15-Aug-02/11:07 PM |
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I could be drunk, I'll read it again, but for now I'm thinking, it's a 10/10
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| Re: Stray by Corey McHattan |
16-Aug-02/12:28 AM |
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You are a fantastic writer, and I am a cat, so I give you a 10, if for nothing else, but that.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Aug-02/7:47 AM |
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I see what you mean, I may have to try it again with your advice. Thanks!
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16-Aug-02/7:51 AM |
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A well written sentiment 7/10
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| Re: moon rants by bluwiz |
16-Aug-02/8:01 AM |
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The ever so rare original thought 7/10
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| Re: This Is Just to Say by waltfreakinwhitman |
16-Aug-02/8:07 AM |
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Unforgivable! I hate when he does that. 5/10
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
16-Aug-02/8:14 AM |
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Da Do Run Run Run Da Do Run Run
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