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The Ballet Studio (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
He shuffles in
whiskey-perfumed
with a dash of the laneways outside.
An incongruous,
scruffy old mongrel
on the shore of a sea of flamingoes.
He rubs his hands, pleased
to tread the musky floorboards
Away from the cold awhile
And watches, rapt
the little princesses flitter-flutter
gaily.
His favourite eludes him, briefly,
Though radiance, undimmed
draws him in
And he relishes in her smile.
Unworldconscious
like a kitten
she plays,
now a blonde little rabbit,
And the resemblance is too, too much.
He aches
pains, stabs, burns
To hold little Sam again.
Across the hall
Mrs Simpson spies him,
Notes his unwarranted
interest
in Victoria,
Strides over.
I'm sorry,
she says.
You'll have to leave.
You're making the girls
(parents)
uncomfortable.
I'm sorry.
Her nose crinkles
disapproval
Her eyes betray
her words
And though she doesn't want
a scene
She notes, with pleasure
the approving murmurs nearby
confirming the victory.
He sighs
then
Humiliated,
Emasculated, flees
Defeat-hunched shoulders drooping...
I wasn't going to hurt anyone.
I just like to watch
the girls dance.
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Posted: August 15, 2002 8:32 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 8:32 PM PDT
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