Re: a comment on Grieving by d35	24-Jan-04/3:40 PM
really? I thought they meant gown. You know, after they cut this loose [off the corpse], they bury it [wrapped up] in the [corpse's] cold gown. Makes more sense, don't you think? I think it's pretty clear the pome is about the fevered thoughts of a serial killer.
Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	24-Jan-04/7:08 AM
My Grandfather loved me the best, He said, holding me close to his chest I stayed deathly still 'till his snores sounded shrill and I could unstick my face from his vest.
Re: Your Kind by TripleHGurl	23-Jan-04/4:51 PM
What the hell are you talking about? What kind? Can we get some kind of clue here what you're talking about?
Re: That's What It's all about. by madjack2	23-Jan-04/4:49 PM
what what's all about? The hokey pokey? Please next time wait 'till it has stopped dribbling before you shake it all about.
Re: She Cries by holden_caulfield	23-Jan-04/4:38 PM
Who the fuck is she? WHY did the stars become runny? Let me get this straight: a naked ship is going to fall on us gently like a snowflake out of the winter mists? A ship... Okey dokey. How can the gentle, floating ship be both brittle and snowflake-like?
Re: Poem #5 (of a series of poems for Boo) by Owner of the Sky	23-Jan-04/4:26 PM
I don't want to be touched by Boo.
Re: simple silence by daniella	23-Jan-04/4:22 PM
well, you certainly squeezed that one dry. You must have been thirsty. That can happen when you go wandering in the arroyos of life. Dry, dry, dry, and then BAM a deluge that leaves you broken and sodden.
Re: If by elixir	23-Jan-04/4:13 PM
WAS. WAS WAS WAS WAS. WAS. AAAARGGGHHH how could you DO that to me. It's like scratching a blackboard. If love WAS I WOULD. If love IS I WILL. Got it?
Re: a comment on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	23-Jan-04/4:09 PM
Oh? and it didn't remind you of, um, any mid-eighties dance music, at all?
Re: a comment on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	23-Jan-04/4:05 PM
um, there already is a song. It's fluttering around in my mind right now, like a wild butterfly.
Re: a comment on Lullaby by Goad	23-Jan-04/2:08 AM
You use your colostomy bag as a pillow? Dude, that's just gross.
Re: a comment on Drunk Satan by smlink84	21-Jan-04/12:58 AM
lololol, oh penguin fiend my dear, post just one of your "poems" on eratosphere. Go on, I dare you.
Re: a comment on Last Night by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/2:36 PM
aww, this is one of my favouritest pomes from the old days. It's so sad & subtle. They will break up, but they don't quite know it out loud yet.
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/9:58 AM
a little late... Well I see that this "thing"'s got you livid And you're sure I should be much more vivid But too long with thesaurus Tends to frustrate and bore us If you know which word's best than just give it.
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/8:18 AM
Since you tire so quickly this session I'll allow you to maintain your repression But no-one is fooled Because how well you tooled Your replies constitutes a confession
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/8:17 AM
This modus of discourse is dear to me And it's swell to find one who's a peer to me To wrap up this round I'll concede your crit sound Though I doubt your advice will adhere to me
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/1:58 AM
Your attack on my "thing" is so vicious That it leaves me quite frankly suspicious that you think something's wrong with both my song & my dong But I assure you my "thing" is delicious
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	20-Jan-04/1:42 AM
Since my "thing" seems to arouse your attention I'm left with a dark apprehension I will keep to bright paths (and stay away from the baths) So we don't risk any further accension.
Re: a comment on Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	19-Jan-04/4:25 PM
Now that right there is why I keep coming back to pomeranker. It sure as hell ain't the orchard. I mean, the poetry.
Re: a comment on Tide Pool by middenHeap	19-Jan-04/4:13 PM
Not to bore the bystanders, shall we continue this discussion in limerick form? So: "you shouldn't have used the word thing" comes a voice from th' ecliptical ring but varmint & critter don't hardly seem fitter lest I too far to the plebian swing.