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Last Night (Free verse) by middenHeap
After our phone conversation
I went out walking
in the cold, with my hands in my pockets,
under the lights on Broadway,
which broadcast about their van Gogh colours
on the unusually quiet strollers,
who all walked quickly, their shoulders hunched
against the cold.
Then I turned right on Madison
and walked up the hill,
and the unseasonal frost
made a small crunching under my boots
(but my feet were very warmâ
I have very good boots,
and excellent socks,
though my ears were a little cold
and became red).
I stopped
near the top of the hill
under the large pines,
where the street is very dark,
and watched the little flakes of snow
for a while, coming down through the boughs--
how they come down so obstinately,
at their own pace (not like rain,
which falls straight and fast
to earth) each flake following
its own curling path
to the same
destination.
And after a while
I started to get a little cold
so I walked back down the hill
and back down Broadway
with its lights
to the house where I was staying,
where I looked at my picture of you
for a while, in the warmth
before going to bed.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7830
Posted: January 20, 2004 2:26 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2004 2:26 PM PST
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