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A Second Chance (Free verse) by darkshark
The field is bare
From the harvest
And the fire
Ashes and dirt
Like memories
Mold to my foot
Leaving my mark
Where I have been
Where I have walked
You all stand there
In a circle
Not saying anything
Just looking
As I come towards you
Head down
Hands in my pockets
Focusing on the soil
Like roots
Holding me
Where I belong
Between the sky
And the ever-widening sea
That I have sailed across
A thousand times
Gazing out across this farmland
Wandering what lies beyond
My waves of grain
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7832
Posted: February 9, 2004 7:37 PM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2004 7:37 PM PST
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