| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
9-Oct-02/12:40 AM |
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| Re: Drunken note #1 by blackball |
8-Oct-02/11:58 PM |
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Well these are pretty bad. Maybe drunk is not your color. There not as bad as the moronic comments left by Jigg. You're not really saying anything are you?
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| Re: rapping on caffeine by blackball |
8-Oct-02/11:37 PM |
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Ilike this. Except for "live and die..." how does one live and die by fraility. I'm not getting it. The last couplet is strong, sensual and sad. For your mere 19, not bad at all. 19, good god.
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| Re: a comment on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator |
8-Oct-02/8:00 PM |
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Baby, you look sexy to me too. Talk with you soon.
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| Re: a comment on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator |
8-Oct-02/7:50 PM |
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I immediately take no stereotypes. You are jumpimg to conclusions. The poem you're referring to does not state that all muslims are evil. first of all I don't even believe in evil. Second of all I am the least prejudice person you will ever have the luck to run in to. I love the poem because of it's structure and it's satire on this whole terrorist nonsense. You take yourself too seriously. Stop making a jackass of yourself. The world is full of viewpoints. Learn how to handle yourself like an adult. What kind of stereotype am I? you know nothing about me, my life-style, or my beliefs. I am everything you third-worlders wish all Americans would be. you owe me an apology.
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| Re: Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29 |
8-Oct-02/7:07 PM |
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Sweet child. You are alone because you choose it, or because you need chemicals to help you with your depression. Either way, it makes me sad to think of you languishing in solitude. Life is short to the extreme.
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| Re: After The Storm by kccolt |
8-Oct-02/5:41 PM |
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| Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator |
8-Oct-02/5:39 PM |
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Wite a poem about teaching Joanna how to take care of herself. That might be interesting and not so stereotypically condescending.
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| Re: a comment on My Trick-Knee. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-Oct-02/5:30 PM |
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Don't be frightened, I'll take care of you. Here, have a cookie.
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| Re: Trying to say by persephone6358 |
8-Oct-02/5:28 PM |
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Blughh! This is an all around failure. Cliche and badly written. I don't usually comment on bad poetry written by well intentioned youth, but this is so alarmingly bad I could not keep quiet.
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| Re: My Trick-Knee. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-Oct-02/5:17 PM |
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Just keeps getting better. There's a place called heaven and a place called hell. There is a place as cold and disturbing as nightmares at the bottom of a lake.
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| Re: Down Home by <~> |
8-Oct-02/11:56 AM |
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A gem. Your prettiest I think. I love everything about this poem, beginning, middle and end.
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| Re: Charlottesville by New Life Drug |
8-Oct-02/11:21 AM |
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You know this is a poignant scene and you have a couple of lines that work , torn like lightening is good. and S2 is enjoyable intil the last line. Too much like a journal entry too little like a poem.
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| Re: Thanksgiving Dream Sequence by Venus |
8-Oct-02/10:35 AM |
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You're a nut. An insightful articulate nut.
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| Re: Velvetted by knickytoy |
2-Oct-02/9:07 AM |
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Well peaches, somehow I overlooked this one. "didn't even bleed " threw me off a bit, but the title helped. Very clever. The last 3 lines are beautiful.
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| Re: Why? by martysmiles |
2-Oct-02/8:50 AM |
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| Re: Entropy by knickytoy |
2-Oct-02/8:46 AM |
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| Re: An Agenda by INTRANSIT |
2-Oct-02/8:44 AM |
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I'm gettign lost. "Wetness finishing"? No entiendo?
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| Re: Local Boy Makes Good by Gwyrfab |
2-Oct-02/8:38 AM |
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I am a great friend of Jesus'. He told me to tell you your poem makes him smile.
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| Re: The Cross Foxes by Gwyrfab |
2-Oct-02/8:34 AM |
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This has the feel of something old and timeless and traditional. It takes talent to accomplish that.
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