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Entropy (Free verse) by knickytoy
Soon beer shall excrete anxiety And glass will break; Yet some better mess Will supplant thee. Pray in ink, okay?
Up the ladder: Friends Diminished
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Overall Rank: 3833
Posted: October 2, 2002 6:58 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2002 6:58 AM PDT
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[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 2-Oct-02/7:07 AM | Reply
You promised a poem on entropy and, my girl, you delivered. I am slightly freaked by beer excreting stuff - I shall steer clear of the pub for a while I think. Great image to choose.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/7:22 AM | Reply
Ta Christof, but please do go to the pub and have a pint of heavy for me.
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/7:24 AM | Reply
Do you like bitter? Yummm.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/7:25 AM | Reply
ESB!
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/7:27 AM | Reply
You're my kind of girl. I shall have two to celebrate. Whereabouts do you get your ESB?
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/7:35 AM | Reply
Hard to find around here but not impossible. I shall get some for my Scrabble rematch with Ms.Z. Too bad there are no pubs here. The bars are just not the same.??
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/7:36 AM | Reply
No, bars are not right for ESB. You must have been to Britain at some point I would guess.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/7:42 AM | Reply
Several times. Lastly, Christmas 2000. Went to services at Westminster Abbey. Now that's going to church! Most memorably, many years ago, spending July bartending in a pub in Northumbria.
Lots of umemployed coalminers playing darts.+
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/7:44 AM | Reply
Fantastic. So you know ESB etc as a professional. Much respect to you. That stuff requires care and attention if it's going to be served properly. Oooh I am really hankering for a pint now. And a game of darts. But not unemployment.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/7:50 AM | Reply
What's the name of your local?.
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/7:53 AM | Reply
The Crown. It's pretty good - it's in Cricklewood in NW London. The best pub in the world is the Blisland Tavern in Cornwall, but that is no way local.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/8:20 AM | Reply
I always wanted to go to Cornwall. Read all of Malory. And Manderly is supposed to be in Cornwall right? Very romantic place.
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[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/8:23 AM | Reply
You can have a drink in the Jamica Inn that du Maurier wrote about. She lived around there so I think Manderly is based on a real place (but can't remeber where). If you liked Malory you should definitely go to see Tintagel - the castle, supposedly Arthur's birthplace, is amazing, all rocks and crags and cliffs now with the ruined walls cropping out above.
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 > Christof | 2-Oct-02/8:50 AM | Reply
I'll pretend I'm Ygraine waiting up for Uther.
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > knickytoy | 2-Oct-02/8:53 AM | Reply
He'll be gone a long time.
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.137.4 | 2-Oct-02/8:46 AM | Reply
okay.
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