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Trying to say (Free verse) by persephone6358 Every single time you look at me
I think that I might cry
Because I am so happy
That you are in my life
You make me laugh
Sometimes you can make me cry
More than anything that you make me
You make me feel beautiful
You mean so much to me
More then you will ever know
I guess what i am trying to say is..
Baby.. I love you so
Up the ladder:
Oh So!
Down the ladder:
Sex
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Posted: October 8, 2002 5:19 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2002 5:19 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.5 Overall Rank: 13599 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.100
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8-Oct-02/12:36 PM
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Dear gods. I cannot imagine why Hades would ever want to steal you away. I think I'll go warn him.
Blughh! This is an all around failure. Cliche and badly written. I don't usually comment on bad poetry written by well intentioned youth, but this is so alarmingly bad I could not keep quiet.
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