Free verse № 19187

Trying to say

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Every single time you look at me I think that I might cry Because I am so happy That you are in my life You make me laugh Sometimes you can make me cry More than anything that you make me You make me feel beautiful You mean so much to me More then you will ever know I guess what i am trying to say is.. Baby.. I love you so

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[0] Tintagiles 8-Oct-02/12:36 PM Reply

Dear gods. I cannot imagine why Hades would ever want to steal you away. I think I'll go warn him.

[1] god'swife 8-Oct-02/5:28 PM Reply

Blughh! This is an all around failure. Cliche and badly written. I don't usually comment on bad poetry written by well intentioned youth, but this is so alarmingly bad I could not keep quiet.