poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ShaNoN+960317485 (101-120) and replies

Comments byShaNoN+960317485, 101–120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on BREATH by ShaNoN+960317485 10 Nov 2003, 6:24 AM
the 'e' kinda makes it odd... thats what i feel so thats how i kept it:o)
on As I sit alone by baby_d 10 Nov 2003, 6:13 AM
Your bickering has given me a heavy headache, tsk tsk seems 2 much sparetime at ya hands:o)
on My First Love Proposal by ShaNoN+960317485 10 Nov 2003, 6:06 AM
Hope such fell ideas never occure 2 me again:o)
on I Found a Box... by leviathan 8 Nov 2003, 7:10 AM
This is better than before & 7X stronger with age:o)
on The Burial by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2003, 7:06 AM
Amen...
on Leaving in the Morning by leviathan 8 Nov 2003, 7:04 AM
Hope the lord takes her in:o)
on A Succubus Wedding Ceremony by SupremeDreamer 8 Nov 2003, 6:57 AM
the idle gods has be woken & of ye a scornchild is cursed to birth...
I luved its twists...nd liked the the build up:o)
on True Love by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2003, 6:48 AM
My hand touched me crotch & it did something akin to the hair... Thats not love...but if u had said lust - maybe just maybe worth a 10 from me:o(
on Understanding by hobojo 8 Nov 2003, 6:42 AM
123 i just dont know:o)
Fr the love of the lord...what in gods name is this.. A fucking what...
on Thoughts by tori 8 Nov 2003, 2:48 AM
tought never escape fr my brain has claws..a rusty cage borded up with a chunk of glass... enough id say to keep them in as a green house wud...n i think....
i think...darn the thought is stuck n i hv lost the keys....So long:o)
on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly 8 Nov 2003, 2:31 AM
id hate 2 see ya in the rest o the week - what wud u be doing i hate 2 ponder...But liked ya ideas of childish n simple methods fr suicide. It brings in a strong end of the stick called emotion into the pic..
super wud be a mockery, but good wud be fair:o)
on Memory by SILYLILGURL 8 Nov 2003, 2:24 AM
I thought Italy is inclusive of everywhere, must be that i am wrong. If u ask a fool he wud nod n say this is great; since i am one myself i'd also nod n say u wanted 2 say more but u chose less. Just rem that anything that haunts is never short. Hence in the end i gota say its worth a 08max no more no less:o)
replying on BREATH by ShaNoN+960317485 8 Nov 2003, 2:14 AM
Thanx but 'whats there in a name' - long or short, wound or horned the guy in ref is, if he is:o)
replying on Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485 8 Nov 2003, 2:09 AM
u ref to my dick.. if so thanx:o)
replying on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:39 AM
in our little town Kmart means a miser... rather an peculiar understanding hence:o), But 2 say the least, this is a little FLUFFY:o)
replying on Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 6:59 AM
nah, not as a user. But yea a month or so back i found myself in here... Y, did i do something wrong:o),
on Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485 4 Nov 2003, 10:02 PM
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
on BREATH by ShaNoN+960317485 4 Nov 2003, 9:28 PM
For my dear BREATH:o)
on Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485 4 Nov 2003, 9:20 PM
In memory of my weak heart:o)