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My First Love Proposal (Free verse) by ShaNoN+960317485
As I open, a shutter close
Maw search for the lost words
As out come meaningless clause
Punctuationâs and senseless pause
A smile I stretch, forms a sneer
Chunks of food there held by the cusp
Along with the whiff of the last sup
Rode snarled in wind-mareâs husk
Eyes held, a stare stormed
Veins of desire in web ensnared
Pupil in eternal dilute stare
Peeked the lines of oceans tear
My hands waved, to paint the air
But to it I flourished much confuse stock
As in its dear flight came a stroke
To cheek that broke into break a revoke
Needless to speak, gainless to be told
That a monster of her I hath mold
The Angel bound in vicious hulk hold
That spared my neck but staved my adore
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.714286
Weighted score: 6.683452
Overall Rank: 528
Posted: November 10, 2003 6:04 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2003 6:04 AM PST
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