poemranker ::Understanding by hobojo

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Understanding

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

She wakes up early goes to church donates to charity and eats salads Takes long walks listens to real music reads intellectual books thinking she understands Another watches on a nonbeliever he eats sushi and spends all his money Plays sports plays the bass reads comics knows he lacks understanding Another watches he analyzes observes makes mental notes He laughs he coughs up blood he can not read and knows what no one knows

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[9] ShaNoN+960317485 8-Nov-03/6:42 AM Reply
123 i just dont know:o)
[8] deleted user 8-Nov-03/2:14 PM Reply
Nice turn