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Understanding (Free verse) by hobojo
She wakes up early goes to church donates to charity and eats salads Takes long walks listens to real music reads intellectual books thinking she understands Another watches on a nonbeliever he eats sushi and spends all his money Plays sports plays the bass reads comics knows he lacks understanding Another watches he analyzes observes makes mental notes He laughs he coughs up blood he can not read and knows what no one knows

Up the ladder: Decide
Down the ladder: No delusions.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4364
Posted: November 7, 2003 8:36 AM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2003 8:36 AM PST
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[9] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 8-Nov-03/6:42 AM | Reply
123 i just dont know:o)
[8] deleted user @ 81.178.159.225 | 8-Nov-03/2:14 PM | Reply
Nice turn
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