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True Love (Haiku) by Mona Lisa
As he kissed me The hairs on my neck stood up I knew this was love.

Up the ladder: Shouting at dogs
Down the ladder: Little Bird

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11042
Posted: November 8, 2003 4:21 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2003 4:21 AM PST
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[1] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 8-Nov-03/6:48 AM | Reply
My hand touched me crotch & it did something akin to the hair... Thats not love...but if u had said lust - maybe just maybe worth a 10 from me:o(
[n/a] deleted user @ 81.178.159.225 | 8-Nov-03/2:01 PM | Reply
Nope,

I like most of your others though
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 9-Nov-03/4:51 AM | Reply
Vaginal and bountiful.
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 | 16-Nov-03/1:37 AM | Reply
That's how it works.
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