| Re: UNTITLED by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/12:30 PM |
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| Re: Porn by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/2:23 PM |
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Yeah, it does need some work. But I thought i'd let it out in its raw form. Just to see how shitty it could sound. Anywho, it's called "porn" because thats the reason my mom and I kinda left the house one day.. my mom got so pissed when my dad wasn't paying attention to her cuz he was too busy playin around with his porno channels. It really hurts her when she is ignored, and I can recognize that when they get in their little fights. She feels really alone, and my parents' actions rub off on me. This is pretty much how it felt. Plus the idea of porn sorta symbolizes something uncomfortable and the way I feel when life gets fucked up.
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
31-Jul-02/2:32 PM |
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Hey this would make an awesome song. Its definitely good.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-02/2:51 PM |
the new users/over flowing i can understand... eh.. at least 4 or 5 poems a week would be nice
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We should be able to submit more than 3 poems a week. My god, I have tons of poems! And I've only got like.. 3 or 4 up. COME ON! I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG... there needs to be something new and fresh for the readers to see. poetry must not have a limit.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-02/7:10 PM |
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Like Woa. Fasheezee-riffic! Its blasted brilliant. Snaps to you my friend.
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| Re: He loves me by susie |
31-Jul-02/9:35 PM |
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| Re: Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799 |
31-Jul-02/9:38 PM |
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| Re: cold sonnet by <~> |
31-Jul-02/9:39 PM |
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reminds me of the setting in Evil Dead
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| Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey |
31-Jul-02/9:41 PM |
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| Re: Tate Street 1956 by wunboi |
31-Jul-02/9:43 PM |
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sounds like a lovely summer memory, yet sad as it reveals what is happening to these people in their time
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9-Aug-02/5:23 PM |
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
9-Aug-02/5:26 PM |
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| Re: Dream Dead by New Life Drug |
9-Aug-02/5:30 PM |
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| Re: Sawdust by New Life Drug |
15-Aug-02/9:15 PM |
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| Re: Daily Rutein by New Life Drug |
30-Aug-02/7:29 PM |
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Exactly, I'm glad SOMEONE notices it sucks. By the way, that was like the first piece of poem/songs I ever wrote
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| Re: Ignored by PK |
2-Sep-02/7:52 PM |
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Seems barely poem-like. More just random thoughts. As a reflection, it is good. As poetry, it is muck. Yet, I understand exactly how you feel. So 7 for you.
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| Re: tullip by christian |
2-Sep-02/7:53 PM |
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Where is the depth? My goodness... oh well. I suppose pets don't mean much to you. Or the opposite, since you chose to write this trash. 6 for you.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Sep-02/7:56 PM |
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8 for you. I'm not sure what to say though...
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| Re: Fireplay by drjhoss |
2-Sep-02/8:11 PM |
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cool. I think I get what you're trying to say.
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