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tullip (Free verse) by christian my dog tullip
i loved her
she returned it
in her own way
as a pup
she shook with fear
my scent
gave her peace
in her eyes
i could see intelegence
wizdom love fear
her tail waged
she loved cats
cats hated her
she kept me warm
cold winter nights
kisses of welcome
me missing her
she missing me
broken heart of leaving again
gone but still here
in my heart
i wont forget
i wont let her die
twice
Up the ladder:
Teaching Beetles To Swim
Down the ladder:
domination
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Posted: July 10, 2002 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 11:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7531 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.108.147
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11-Jul-02/6:25 AM
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Your spelling needs work, but that's so sweet..
Where is the depth? My goodness... oh well. I suppose pets don't mean much to you. Or the opposite, since you chose to write this trash. 6 for you.
I'm more of a cat guy, but this is a damn good poem
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