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domination (Free verse) by midnight a puppet on a string
a doll to dress up
to have something to control
because you feel your own lives are out of your hands
dress her up
in a pretty pink dress
and a matching purse
with blushing cheeks
put up the stage
a happy show
pulling your joints out of place
a string connected to your mouth to make you smile
emotions aren't allowed
just fake joy for life
when inside you are screaming
for it to stop
Up the ladder:
tullip
Down the ladder:
Currents
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Posted: July 12, 2002 1:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 1:55 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7529 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.88.121
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29-Jul-02/10:01 PM
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WHAT ISN'T MANLY ABOUT PINK
great thoughts. really. Lot's of potentional. now write a poem about it. See Christof or babbitt for examples
the feeling is there:o)
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice
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