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tullip (Free verse) by christian

my dog tullip i loved her she returned it in her own way as a pup she shook with fear my scent gave her peace in her eyes i could see intelegence wizdom love fear her tail waged she loved cats cats hated her she kept me warm cold winter nights kisses of welcome me missing her she missing me broken heart of leaving again gone but still here in my heart i wont forget i wont let her die twice

New Life Drug 2-Sep-02/7:53 PM
Where is the depth? My goodness... oh well. I suppose pets don't mean much to you. Or the opposite, since you chose to write this trash. 6 for you.




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