Re: a comment on Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	20-Oct-03/2:28 PM
Brilliant!! My mother started using it, and now her age spots have completely faded away!
Re: a comment on Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	20-Oct-03/1:19 PM
what has become of post 11538?
Re: Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	20-Oct-03/1:10 PM
"rotting time" "hollow stone" "eternal view" "insomniatic dreams" I could do with one less "warm" in the last stanza.
Re: what i thought i was thinking by FreeFormFixation	20-Oct-03/12:52 PM
a flash of inspiration.
Re: Decay by INTRANSIT	20-Oct-03/12:39 PM
Very sexual; made me think of a chastity belt. and with an excellent cadence.
Re: Devour by leviathan	19-Oct-03/5:37 PM
very sad. lots of sadness. sad sad sad poem. I've written them, you've written them... what else ya got?
Re: a comment on You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik	19-Oct-03/2:59 PM
I am, then, honored to be in the company of royalty. You'll forgive me, though, if I don't read it again - the first was already a waste of my time.
Re: You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik	19-Oct-03/2:45 PM
who is James - who are you, and why do I have to read about either of you?? "bequeeth" is "ea", but I think you meant "beseech", unless you were saying it as he might, presumably as wrongly as you? No idea. to eath his own.
Re: broken by GekoHawaii	19-Oct-03/7:18 AM
okay, I was tolerating the expression because the meter is perfect up to stanza three. I think, too, btw that you've just barely straddled the comfortable side of unforced rhyme - so, not bad in that regard.
Re: a comment on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361	18-Oct-03/4:45 PM
MAN, you totally crack me up. (seriously and without any malice or sarcasm)
Re: Sonnet or Limerick? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	18-Oct-03/9:10 AM
SEE now that's a SONNET! I knew you could do it.
Re: two tunnels blip out by skaskowski	16-Oct-03/7:27 PM
I'll grant that it's probably clever - though it may sound more so than is so; I do, however, appreciate the unusual form. The other two: sapphires; this - more muddy. I will admit, it can be fun to play in the mud.
Re: Tabula Rasa by skaskowski	16-Oct-03/7:24 PM
Writ with a confident, skilled hand that pulls words as concepts onto stacks with a geometric efficiency. Once again, I have to work to understand what shape this equation takes - but I want to.
Re: paper fragments by skaskowski	16-Oct-03/7:18 PM
This is quite nice; flowing, roaming within an easy pattern. Having said that, I'm gonna haveta read it a few more times to figure out what the hell it's about - but, you know what? - I look forward to it.
Re: a comment on Blue Collar Beat by Big Daddy	16-Oct-03/5:38 PM
And I thought you were a stunningly good judge of character - maybe we were both right. (besides, I was trying to be polite - dick. Don't say anything to big daddy - he scares me)
Re: Blue Collar Beat by Big Daddy	16-Oct-03/2:20 PM
fairly engaging. and in interesting format.
Re: The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone	16-Oct-03/2:15 PM
squishy
Re: Nudesflash by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	15-Oct-03/6:19 PM
Funny as hell; very clever! my favorite: "*Nude thirds of all nudely-weds cannot afford to buy a nude home, a nude survey reveals. “We’re thinking of emigrating to Nudefoundland,” say Mr amd Mrs John Nude." (it's still nude a God Damned sonnet...)
Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise	15-Oct-03/11:42 AM
most excerrent.
Re: For M. B. by Tits	15-Oct-03/11:27 AM
I would like to tell you how impressed I am at this poem.