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Devour (Free verse) by leviathan
Sweet summer heat gives way
to harsher cold freezing out the light
Shadows rise as soldiers preped for battle
The sun is dead; they declare into the night
The moon is king; ending the reign of day
Childish innocence melts away
replaced by shame turning into regret
Scars emerge as headstones for faded memories
The soul is dead; it decays into the night
The pain is king; ending faith in anything divine
Hazy solitude grows thick in time
devouring every wonderful sight
Emptiness births echos that sound like voices
Your are dead; there's nothing more to be done
Death becomes king; devouring me as there is nothing
else for me to become.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7965
Posted: October 19, 2003 5:18 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2003 5:18 PM PDT
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I've written them, you've written them...
what else ya got?