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Did I Miss Something? (Haiku) by miraclemaker
Her passion he missed Kissed, they sat in the balance Danced, then fell apart
Up the ladder: Eternity
Down the ladder: knocked down to look up
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7973
Posted: December 23, 2004 6:41 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2004 6:41 PM PST
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