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tearthief (Free verse) by artiphishal
Sounds like missing tears feeling summer from inside pillow case interior eyelashes clamped together, zippering the backstage act black sage sniffling, a soon to be cough gagging on icing sugar, alone in a drought back-peddling uphill from an intersection pushing the door closed on heels who pass rewinding the film to see the end wrenching heart beats from open palms mouth motions to sing, but nothing notes buying seeds for weeds come spring embedding slivers into flesh glass shards touching and rubbing beneath eye’s lid Tear thief emptying her sack into the sea

Up the ladder: Inside Out
Down the ladder: Vortex Space

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7892
Posted: May 28, 2004 12:06 PM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2004 12:06 PM PDT
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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 28-May-04/3:12 PM | Reply
Not bad
[7] DustyStar @ 24.162.26.96 | 16-Jun-04/5:03 PM | Reply
very uhhh nice lines dont seem to go together but good I loved ure comment about the medicine cabinet's mirror
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