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Judgement (Free verse) by Damien
As I sit here writing I contemplate the right thing
I express the truth form my heart I sing
Yet you write poetry with grammar infront of meaning
Whereas I write the meaning without judging the proceeding
Without grammar holding me back I am flexible to attract
So you attack trying to make sense of what I lack
I am not judging a single statement I let out
For who am I to judge what the world is about
You see you cannot get past my emotional shield
As I will write with a new style not to appeal
And I understand it does not make sense to the book worms
You are already held down by your reliable terms
So judge judge judge and judge some more
But you look like dirt on my front door
You cannot give a conclusion of what I have achieved
At seventeen I believe I have much to conceive
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7911
Posted: April 13, 2005 6:01 AM PDT; Last modified: April 13, 2005 8:26 AM PDT
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