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Free verse № 133430

Now and Memory

Member since 2005 · Posted 14 Nov 2005 · 1 comment

cast upon the canvas of Now and Memory, sketched within my past tense, she waits (still life) for me. a portrait of indifference masks a face I used to know. remote, she keeps her distance, always certain I will go. I speak at last, "Hello, again" she circles warily; then hides her eyes when tears begin, as I watch helplessly. fearfully, her arms reach out. "don't leave me anymore?" heart aching at the hopeless doubt in her whispered "like before". at once came comprehension, my head bowed, ashamed, i wept and gathered close my youth's reflection, dressed in years of self-neglect.

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[8] Dovina 14-Nov-05/5:51 PM Reply
Good. I'd shorten the first verse to give it more power: cast upon the canvas, sketched within my past,
she waits for me. Or somesuch.