Re: a comment on Monday by betty swallox |
6-Feb-04/3:47 AM |
I'm not hitting random you presumptious ass - I'm doing what is expected to be done; when I log onto the site I am presented with a poem and I vote.
These posters might still receive email comments.
How 'bout you sit back and watch the pretty lights for a while?
;o)
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Re: A Panglossian Farmer by richa |
5-Feb-04/9:24 PM |
paints an interesting picture; fresh.
walls? plural? why?
I like the "week in plaster" but it pulls me from a simpler time; smacks of technology - maybe a splint?
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Re: Monday by betty swallox |
5-Feb-04/9:06 PM |
what is this shirty you speak of?
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Re: Damien by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
5-Feb-04/8:59 PM |
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Re: The City (New Jerusaem) by blkarak |
5-Feb-04/8:59 PM |
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Re: without music by Limness |
5-Feb-04/8:58 PM |
what you say is not badly said - yet...
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Re: Prize gained life, Death in wages by GTK |
5-Feb-04/8:56 PM |
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Re: a comment on Something's gone wrong by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/6:12 PM |
Nah, seriously - the list morphs hither and thither.
And thank you.
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Re: a comment on Something's gone wrong by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/3:07 PM |
HA! I just looked at the top 20 - yep. That's a little skewed!
But I figure there's a few that actually deserve to be up there. The ones that are there, if they are not among the best on poemranker, they are, at least, the best that I can muster (though I personally wouldn't put them in that particular order).
It will correct itself and I'll maybe have a couple few left there.
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Re: a comment on Something's gone wrong by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/3:03 PM |
(i fixed the zero, heheh) and I'm on the best list because, quite simply, I am one of the best here.
*Certainly* one of the top 20.
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Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac |
5-Feb-04/2:08 PM |
spacing makes me a bit screwed up
but then (I was always a bit so)
what does it all mean? I guess I'll have to use your scale of measurement for such things.
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Re: There is a pea in my bed by w~* ATHENA *~w |
4-Feb-04/6:00 PM |
why you be a plagiarisah? tha be bad.
bad gir.
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Re: a comment on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Feb-04/1:17 PM |
Hole-ee frickin Lord - you are easily the funniest [emotional and perhaps otherwise] cripple I have come across (here, use this handi-wipe).
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Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
1-Feb-04/7:48 PM |
Brilliant.
Anyone voting less than an *almighty* TEN - is an ass - and I mean that, else God take my eyes.
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Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam |
1-Feb-04/5:30 PM |
Glad for that, and I wish you the same.
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Re: Drizzle by Sam |
31-Jan-04/4:04 AM |
Actually, this is quite good for the most part.
"Flood the land with gentle take over" is not.
I can do without "forlornly" and "little" in this context.
I think it's still deserving of a nine though - nice job.
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Re: To Avalon by annabellee |
31-Jan-04/3:59 AM |
A good synthesis and gently embedded rhymes - but I can't decide if it's too long or too short...
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Re: Covers by sonawrote |
31-Jan-04/3:56 AM |
It's quite close to something good but it's kept back a bit, i think, by some of the rhymes and that last part where disguise is repeated - somehow gets difficult there. I'd say worth re-working a bit.
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Re: My Angel by emilys369 |
28-Jan-04/1:25 PM |
OMG - this is precious:
"I think of him always,
twenty-four seven.
I know he will always be,
my angel from heaven."
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Re: So Much**coment this sucks. I want to make it better by Freethinker1602 |
27-Jan-04/1:19 PM |
17 lines = 17 poems yet to be made; each is title.
Its a shopping list, come back with a full bag.
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