Comments byShuushin, 821–840 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Monday by betty swallox 6 Feb 2004, 3:47 AM
I'm not hitting random you presumptious ass - I'm doing what is expected to be done; when I log onto the site I am presented with a poem and I vote.

These posters might still receive email comments.

How 'bout you sit back and watch the pretty lights for a while?

;o)
on A Panglossian Farmer by richa 5 Feb 2004, 9:24 PM
paints an interesting picture; fresh.

walls? plural? why?

I like the "week in plaster" but it pulls me from a simpler time; smacks of technology - maybe a splint?
on Monday by betty swallox 5 Feb 2004, 9:06 PM
what is this shirty you speak of?
on Damien by Sugarbbybuttrfly 5 Feb 2004, 8:59 PM
you are = you're
on The City (New Jerusaem) by blkarak 5 Feb 2004, 8:59 PM
too much of not enough.
on without music by Limness 5 Feb 2004, 8:58 PM
what you say is not badly said - yet...
on Prize gained life, Death in wages by GTK 5 Feb 2004, 8:56 PM
close.
replying on Something's gone wrong by zodiac 5 Feb 2004, 6:12 PM
Nah, seriously - the list morphs hither and thither.

And thank you.
replying on Something's gone wrong by zodiac 5 Feb 2004, 3:07 PM
HA! I just looked at the top 20 - yep. That's a little skewed!

But I figure there's a few that actually deserve to be up there. The ones that are there, if they are not among the best on poemranker, they are, at least, the best that I can muster (though I personally wouldn't put them in that particular order).

It will correct itself and I'll maybe have a couple few left there.
replying on Something's gone wrong by zodiac 5 Feb 2004, 3:03 PM
(i fixed the zero, heheh) and I'm on the best list because, quite simply, I am one of the best here.

*Certainly* one of the top 20.
on Something's gone wrong by zodiac 5 Feb 2004, 2:08 PM
spacing makes me a bit screwed up
but then (I was always a bit so)

what does it all mean? I guess I'll have to use your scale of measurement for such things.
on There is a pea in my bed by w~* ATHENA *~w 4 Feb 2004, 6:00 PM
why you be a plagiarisah? tha be bad.

bad gir.
replying on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3 Feb 2004, 1:17 PM
Hole-ee frickin Lord - you are easily the funniest [emotional and perhaps otherwise] cripple I have come across (here, use this handi-wipe).
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Feb 2004, 7:48 PM
Brilliant.

Anyone voting less than an *almighty* TEN - is an ass - and I mean that, else God take my eyes.
replying on Drizzle by Sam 1 Feb 2004, 5:30 PM
Glad for that, and I wish you the same.
on Drizzle by Sam 31 Jan 2004, 4:04 AM
Actually, this is quite good for the most part.

"Flood the land with gentle take over" is not.

I can do without "forlornly" and "little" in this context.

I think it's still deserving of a nine though - nice job.
on To Avalon by annabellee 31 Jan 2004, 3:59 AM
A good synthesis and gently embedded rhymes - but I can't decide if it's too long or too short...
on Covers by sonawrote 31 Jan 2004, 3:56 AM
It's quite close to something good but it's kept back a bit, i think, by some of the rhymes and that last part where disguise is repeated - somehow gets difficult there. I'd say worth re-working a bit.
on My Angel by emilys369 28 Jan 2004, 1:25 PM
OMG - this is precious:

"I think of him always,
twenty-four seven.
I know he will always be,
my angel from heaven."
on So Much**coment this sucks. I want to make it better by Freethinker1602 27 Jan 2004, 1:19 PM
17 lines = 17 poems yet to be made; each is title.

Its a shopping list, come back with a full bag.