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My Angel (Free verse) by emilys369 My angel has came to me,
right down from the sky.
He gave me his wings,
and taught me to fly.
He came to me like,
a breath of fresh air.
To be without him a second,
just wouldn't be fair.
His hugs are so gentle,
His kisses so sweet.
He's done everything possible,
to sweep me off my feet.
He's never afraid,
to say what comes from his heart.
I knew I'd be with him,
right from the start.
He put the light in my life,
and showed me to see.
I wouldn't change a thing about him,
he's perfect to me.
I think of him always,
twenty-four seven.
I know he will always be,
my angel from heaven.
Up the ladder:
Waiting to understand
Down the ladder:
choices unto death
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Posted: July 26, 2002 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: March 26, 2003 3:20 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10622 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.108.149
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26-Jul-02/10:22 AM
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glad you're happy.
this poem may not mean so much to other people, but if it means this much to you and comes from your heart then i say awesome poem!!
If you're new to writing keep it up!
COME ON EVERYONE LET'S ALL NAME OURSELVES AFTER ANGELS AND WRITE ANGEL SONGS AND POEMS AND USE ANGEL SOFT TOILET PAPER AND EAT ANGEL FOOD CAKE. i'm out for blood now you scrotum strokers. i'm on an angel hunt. sound the trumpets.
i really like this poem. and don't worry about what horus8 says. he told me that i should be skinned alive because i used the word angel. oh well.
i really like this poem. and don't worry about what horus8 says. he told me that i should be skinned alive because i used the word angel. oh well. i give u a 10
Horus most certainly did not! I did! angels..why not succubi or goblins?of all the cheesy, hackneyed shite...angels.the next angel poem i see, i'm hunting down the author and eating their internal organs, raw and dripping out of thier body cavity.
I hadn't gotten around to looking at your work before, Emily...Nicely done!...I'm curious..how long do you usually take to write?
Sweet stuff. 7. Written with a child-like innocence, this is nice. This could still certainly be found in greeting cards, but at least they wouldn't be naff ones.
Not bad. I'd be interested to read more.
cack.
In fact I will go further than that, this poem is a bag of horseshite which I think Justin Timberlake would think about twice before singing.
OMG - this is precious:
"I think of him always, twenty-four seven. I know he will always be, my angel from heaven." 190 view(s)
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